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She moved in on him, he had nowhere to go. All he could do was stand in fear at the feet of the goddess before him,
"Well Trevor, never thought it would come to this, did you? And to think ..
everything was fine not too long ago.." She said, smiling, watching
him. "What are you gonna do to me? Can't you just.. fix me?? Turn me
back to normal.. I don't like this.. just.. don't-" He was cut off as
she began to step closer to him. What could he do? He kept trying to
remember how he had gotten into his current situation, but the whole
day was practically a blur to him. All he remembered was waking up on
the floor of her room, shrunken down to a mere 3 inches. "Well I'm
sorry.." she said sarcastically as she was about to crush him. "Heather!
Come in here!" It was her mom. "Don't move, I'll be right back, and
we'll have some more fun.." She left the room and shut the door behind
her so he couldn't escape. "Okay, I've gotta find some place to hide
before she gets back.." He thought to himself. He looked for a good
spot, and found a place under her bed where he could hide. So he ran
for it. He had to run
a good distance just to get to the other side of her room. It wasn't
easy being that size. He reached the bed, just as she opened the door
and re-entered her room. "So, a game of hide and seek? Okay, but you
know what happens if I find you.." She began looking, and Trevor began to get more worried as she came closer to where he was.He had some cover from clothing that had been tossed
under the bed a while ago, but she could still find him. The ground
shook with every step she took, and it got worse the closer she got to
him. Then everything got quiet, the shaking stopped. "Is it over? Did
she stop looking?" he thought to himself, feeling a little safer now
that she wasn't looking for him. Just as he looked out over from where
he was hiding, he saw her left hand right in front of him, she was
crouched down and searching underneath her bed. Just as he saw that, he
turned back and tried to get back to where he was hiding, but her hand
grabbed him and lifted him into the air. "Aha! I found you! You aren't
very good at hiding are you?" She said, standing up. She held him with
just one hand, and had her hand clenched into a fist, so he couldn't
get away, or fall. Being held like that was a little uncomfortable for
him, because only his head was free, he couldn't move at all. he looked
over her hand at the ground, which was so far away it frightened him,
so he looked away quickly, and instead of down, he looked up, at her.
She was watching him, and enjoying seeing him panic. She put him down
on her bed and stood over him, watching him, her blue eyes staring him
down. "You can't do this to me! People will start looking for me!" he
yelled. "So what? No one would think that I killed you.. I can do
anything I want to you, and no one can do anything about it." She
grinned. What are you gonna do to me?" he asked.  "Oh.. I hadn't given
that much thought.." She said. "Anything that I want.. I could crush
you right now if I want to.." She said, moving her toes to point out
that she would crush him. All I can tell you, is that you'd better do
as I say, or else you'll be punished. After all, you're my slave now..
My little toy to play with until.. until I get bored with you.. Just
like the others.." Trevor was feeling a mix of emotions. He was
frightened after he heard what she just said. He felt so worthless,
just laying on her bed like he was some doll. She stood over him and he
looked up at her, staring at her. She was so beautiful, especially in
his current situation. He felt helpless, knowing that his life could be
ended at any second . All she would have to do is make one movement and
he would be gone. nothing but a stain on her floor and her sock. As
terrifying as all of this was, he enjoyed it. Secretly he admired her,
and even though no one knew, he had a fetish and
greatly loved the thought of giantess. This was like a dream come true
for him. It was almost too good to be true, but he didn't think about
that, he was to frightened to. It may have been a dream come true, but
it was also a nightmare. He was to distracted to realize what she was
doing. Suddenly he was being picked up and held by her index finger and
thumb holding onto the back of his shirt. She lifted him up to her eyes
and looked at him. "You know, you look really good. And I'm kinda
hungry.." She said, licking her lips. She lay down on her bed, holding
onto him. "Wait! Stop! What are you doing?!"he asked, panic in his
voice. "He he.. your squirming around is making me hungry.." she
smiled, enjoying every minute of him dangling in front of her. Stop!
Put me down!" he begged, but it was no use, she just ignored him and
watched, laughing. "Ahh.." she said as she opened her mouth and lowered
him towards it. "No! Don't eat me!!! He screamed and pleaded but still,
she ignored him. She extended her tongue and licked him. Just as he
thought he was going to be eaten, she pulled him away, laughing. "Hey!
That wasn't funny! Stop messing around with me!" he yelled. "Relax..
I'm not gonna hurt you.."she said in an assuring voice. "...Not yet
anyway.." She smiled an evil smile, and placed him on her stomach. He
lay there, fairly relaxed. Being moved up and down by her stomach from
her breathing. He was safe for the time being....
The start of my first story.. I know the formatting for the dialogue is incorrect, but I just don't know how to do it properly. Anyway, this is the first part. Tell me what you think.
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Matjp Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Keep up the good work!
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VoraciousPanda Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Hello, I talked to you on Omegle earlier. My interest was tinies? ^.^ I believe this is the story of yours that I read once.
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Argo55 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
She should eat him! :9
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DeethIrteen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet!
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Furyofdwarf7 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
It's good, your first story is always your hardest.
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awesomely193 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. it isn't easy, but I have ideas as to where i'm gonna take it. and thanks. I'm glad there's people that actually like my work. lol. :D
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Kawalorn Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
Well surely a good piece of work. I like the how you've shown what he thinks and feels. Dunno why, just liked it.
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awesomely193 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. and it's not over. thing's will get much more interesting by the end. not sure how i'm gonna end it though. Not just yet. lol.
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